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From Womb To Tomb

Posted: Wed May 05, 2004 4:59 pm
by sidewalkgod
Going through the motions of self murder,suicide if you must.
The world doesn't care and neither should I.
A busted window in the House of Content.
The world doesn't cry and neither should I.
A consumer of anti-depressants. Light the whispers and smoke, pass it around.
The world doesn't look back and neither should I.
Have sex with your guilt. Progress into nothing and laugh.
The world doesn't show mercy and neither should I.
Babies killing babies. Crack carried in lunchboxes.
The world doesn't die and neither should I.
The world doesn't love me and neither should you.

Re: From Womb To Tomb

Posted: Thu May 06, 2004 8:05 am
by bingolong
sidewalkgod,
Hey man I care!!I like your rhyme pattern alot too!!
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Re: From Womb To Tomb

Posted: Thu May 06, 2004 12:48 pm
by sidewalkgod
bingolong,
I apperiate the care my man. Most of my words I wrote when I was homeless or in my shit ridden childhood.....
And thanks for the kudos on my rhyme pattern!

Re: From Womb To Tomb

Posted: Thu May 06, 2004 1:24 pm
by hubpluh
sidewalkgod,
You are a very gifted writter. When you hit it big, I can say that 'I knew you when' I look forward to hearing more of your homeless ramblings and so forth. You really are a multi-faceted creature it has become a joy and adventure to watch. :-x

Re: From Womb To Tomb

Posted: Fri May 07, 2004 10:18 pm
by vivaknievel
sidewalkgod,
That there, is a fine piece of writin'.

- Jaye

Re: From Womb To Tomb

Posted: Sat May 08, 2004 12:00 pm
by sidewalkgod
vivaknievel,
Thank you very much. Stay tuned cause more is yet to come.