From Womb To Tomb

Use this forum to share your poems or lyrics, or just to post thoughts and opinions in verse.

Moderators: bingolong, Jennifer, tamra

Forum rules
Spam is not allowed. All spammers will be blocked and reported to appropriate agencies.
Post Reply
User avatar
sidewalkgod
Posts: 0
Joined: Tue Feb 19, 2008 8:38 pm
Contact:

From Womb To Tomb

Post by sidewalkgod »

Going through the motions of self murder,suicide if you must.
The world doesn't care and neither should I.
A busted window in the House of Content.
The world doesn't cry and neither should I.
A consumer of anti-depressants. Light the whispers and smoke, pass it around.
The world doesn't look back and neither should I.
Have sex with your guilt. Progress into nothing and laugh.
The world doesn't show mercy and neither should I.
Babies killing babies. Crack carried in lunchboxes.
The world doesn't die and neither should I.
The world doesn't love me and neither should you.
User avatar
bingolong
King of the Smilies
Posts: 27
Joined: Tue Feb 17, 2004 12:27 pm
Contact:

Re: From Womb To Tomb

Post by bingolong »

sidewalkgod,
Hey man I care!!I like your rhyme pattern alot too!!
[img]https://richardpryor.com/forums/images/ ... CF13B9.jpg[/img]
I went to Zimbabwe. I know how white people feel in America now; relaxed! Cause when I heard the police car I knew they weren't coming after me! 
User avatar
sidewalkgod
Posts: 0
Joined: Tue Feb 19, 2008 8:38 pm
Contact:

Re: From Womb To Tomb

Post by sidewalkgod »

bingolong,
I apperiate the care my man. Most of my words I wrote when I was homeless or in my shit ridden childhood.....
And thanks for the kudos on my rhyme pattern!
hubpluh
Posts: 0
Joined: Tue May 04, 2004 4:36 pm

Re: From Womb To Tomb

Post by hubpluh »

sidewalkgod,
You are a very gifted writter. When you hit it big, I can say that 'I knew you when' I look forward to hearing more of your homeless ramblings and so forth. You really are a multi-faceted creature it has become a joy and adventure to watch. :-x
vivaknievel
Posts: 0
Joined: Sun May 02, 2004 5:53 pm
Contact:

Re: From Womb To Tomb

Post by vivaknievel »

sidewalkgod,
That there, is a fine piece of writin'.

- Jaye
Visit Jaye and Poperratic at http://www.poperratic.com
User avatar
sidewalkgod
Posts: 0
Joined: Tue Feb 19, 2008 8:38 pm
Contact:

Re: From Womb To Tomb

Post by sidewalkgod »

vivaknievel,
Thank you very much. Stay tuned cause more is yet to come.
Post Reply