You are an Onomatopoeia(pov)

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You are an Onomatopoeia(pov)

Post by Jennifer » Thu Jul 22, 2004 7:20 pm

I can't help it, if I am smarter than you---
not my fault if you are the fool---
My heart is pure and much stronger than your's
when all you do is bathe is a sewer,
of your anger and hurt
and self-rightous pain
squirming in the dirt--
of your mama's refrain--
bathing in mud of your mama's old pain...
bathing in a mud of your mama's old pain...
we wish you luck and you know your name...

Onomatopoeia

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Re: You are an Onomatopoeia

Post by bingolong » Fri Jul 23, 2004 2:50 am

Jennifer,
Yowsa Yowsa!!! Some poetry you can take literally,figuratively---!!! B-)

Very thought provoking given everything that has been going on lately esspecially when i started thinking about the last four bars....sheds an insightful light on the whole situation. :(
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Re: You are an Onomatopoeia

Post by Jennifer » Fri Jul 23, 2004 4:40 am

bingolong,
Poetry can express things we otherwise might not be able to----
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Re: You are an Onomatopoeia

Post by Linda Sue » Fri Jul 23, 2004 9:43 pm

Jennifer,
That was way cool,(I know some people like that)....You go girl!
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Re: You are an Onomatopoeia

Post by Jennifer » Sat Jul 24, 2004 4:24 am

Linda Sue,
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Re: You are an Onomatopoeia-my pov...

Post by Jennifer » Wed Dec 29, 2004 8:55 am

and still an onomatopoeia! :lol:
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Re: You are an Onomatopoeia-my pov...

Post by Jennifer » Mon Feb 07, 2005 8:16 am

Still!!
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Re: You are an Onomatopoeia-my pov...

Post by Jennifer » Fri Aug 18, 2006 5:51 pm

Jennifer,
...and again... ;)
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